{"id":58,"date":"2005-06-23T23:02:32","date_gmt":"2005-06-24T06:02:32","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/?p=58"},"modified":"2005-06-23T23:16:32","modified_gmt":"2005-06-24T06:16:32","slug":"real-people","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/?p=58","title":{"rendered":"Describing Real People"},"content":{"rendered":"

“The people will bring the places alive.” So says Bill Zinsser, author of the classic On Writing Well<\/a><\/strong><\/em>, Mitchell & Ruff: An American Profile in Jazz<\/em>, Easy to Remember: The Great American Songwriters and Their Songs<\/a><\/strong><\/em>, and American Places<\/em>, to name just a few. He said that while teaching a nonfiction writing course he calls “People & Places.” It’s been more than a few years since I sat in Zinsser’s classroom, but I remember him, and the room, quite well. <\/p>\n

The wood strip coat racks that line two of the walls have jutting protuberances on which to hang one’s garments \u00e2\u20ac\u201d some straight out like nails with super large heads, others at upward angles like single handle water faucets. They are all bare due to the temperate weather of a pleasant Fall evening. The walls appear pale gray, either because they are, or because the florescent lights overhead cast a dingy shadow on aging off-white paint. There is the faint hum of a fan; the air is dry, odorless. Zinsser is spry, trim, with glasses sporting square-ish lenses. His brow is furrowed, perhaps from editing too many student pages filled with passive and not so passive clutter. He is wearing a green striped jacket, white shirt, dark grayish-blue slacks with a brown belt, dark socks, and tennis shoes. Putting down his canvas bag with blue trim, he loosens his blue polka-dot tie to get comfortable. By way of introduction, he tells us that he’s “a fourth-generation New Yorker with roots deep in the cement.” His mother was a “mad clipper” of newspaper articles, so perhaps it should not be surprising that he always wanted to be a newspaperman at the Herald Tribune<\/em>, and thought that the Herald <\/em>was put out just for him. “I set out to get an education and have an interesting life,\u00e2\u20ac\u009d he tells us.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

It was in Zinsser’s class that I first began to really appreciate short but revealing people sketches. Here are a few descriptions, read or re-read in more recent years, that I like a lot. (If the first one sounds familiar it’s because I quoted the first sentence earlier this month<\/a>.)<\/p>\n

Mrs. Reed in Walt Harrington\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s At the Heart of It: Ordinary People, Extraordinary Lives<\/a><\/strong><\/em>:<\/p>\n

At ten in the morning, heading out the front door, Mrs. Reed is a vision of vitality in slow motion. She wears a simple blue-flowered dress and a white spots jacket, opaque stockings, white flats (she wore short heels the other day and vanity cost her a strained muscle that hurt so bad she could barely walk until she doctored herself with Ben-Gay), and a pretty turquoise beret, beneath which she tucks her short dark-gray hair. <\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Four of the workers in Gay Talese’s The Bridge<\/a><\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n

Cicero Mike, who once drove a Capone whiskey truck during Prohibition and recently fell to his death of a bridge near Chicago\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6
\nIndian Al Deal, who kept three women happy out West and came to the bridge each morning in a fancy silk shirt\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6
\nRiphorn Red, who used to paste twenty-dollar bills along the sides of his suitcase and who went berserk one night in a cemetery\u00e2\u20ac\u00a6
\nthe Nutley Kid, who smoked long Italian cigars and chewed snuff and use toilet water and, at lunch, would drink milk and beer \u00e2\u20ac\u201c without taking out the snuff… <\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Mrs. Clare in Truman Capote’s In Cold Blood<\/a><\/strong><\/em>: <\/p>\n

Her celebrity derives not from her present occupation but a previous one\u00e2\u20ac\u201ddance-hall hostess, an incarnation not indicated by her appearance. She is a gaunt, trouser-wearing, woolen-shirted, cowboy-booted, ginger-colored, gingerly-tempered woman of unrevealed age (\u00e2\u20ac\u0153That\u00e2\u20ac\u2122s for me to know, and you to guess\u00e2\u20ac\u009d) but promptly revealed opinions, most of which are announced in a voice of rooster-crow altitude and penetration.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

“The people will bring the places alive.” So says Bill Zinsser, author of the classic On Writing Well, Mitchell & Ruff: An American Profile in Jazz, Easy to Remember: The Great American Songwriters and Their Songs, and American Places, to name just a few. He said that while teaching a nonfiction writing course he calls … Continue reading “Describing Real People”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"om_disable_all_campaigns":false,"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"_uf_show_specific_survey":0,"_uf_disable_surveys":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[7,6],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-58","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-reading-life","category-writing-life"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/58","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=58"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/58\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=58"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=58"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.devradowrite.com\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=58"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}